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Decay by ~Tortured-Raven:iconTortured-Raven:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed




Fucking confusion
Rot in my brain
Ripping out my hair
I'm going insane.
Too many questions;
No answers found
Eyes stitched closed
Hands tightly bound
Mouth filled with maggots
Naked and cold
Laughing and crying
With no one to hold.
Psychopathic insomnia
To which there is no end;
Wounds that will not heal
No god to make amends.
Scratching at my legs;
Body covered in disease
Nails shattered and broken
Head covered by fleas.
Screams that are silent
A voice that is sore,
Fallen to the shadows
I am ever more.
©2004-2009 ~Tortured-Raven
:icontortured-raven:

Author's Comments

Where did this come from?

...I really cannot say....

::*(EDIT)*::

PROBLEMS WITH THE COMMAS NO MORE!!!! *sheesh* also added a few things..

*****

Picture minipulated by me....

Stock-

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~Vinjenta Aug 26, 2004, 9:58:58 PM
Very dark, I love the brushes you used on the walls, it adds emotion to the picture

--
I found myself once, I said "Hey there good lookin."
:blackrose: :skullbones: :blackrose:
:icontherandomes:
~Therandomes Aug 26, 2004, 10:38:26 PM
beautiful!
and the poem is awesome too its hilarious :rofl: :drunk:
:iconfatacorvina:
~FataCorvina Aug 26, 2004, 11:57:54 PM
Great... just great!!!

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:blackrose: *I will blacken your eyes and mute your mouth,
blind love is the bound.
I reach to your heart it's cold inside.
I'll suffer in flames that burns my eyes* :blackrose:

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:iconsilentsaturn:
~SilentSaturn Aug 26, 2004, 11:58:42 PM
Really dark and tortured picture! Great work!
:iconcandyillusion:
~candyillusion Aug 27, 2004, 3:23:04 AM
this is awsum!!! the poem is so dark....and very descriptive!!! i really like the way youve depicted the dire concept of decay!!! i also like the image youve used....ive seen several versions of this stock....but i think this is my fave take on it to date!! :)

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....see tomorrow....
....feel today....
....say goodbye to yesterday....
....feel no sorrow....
....just be free....
....total ecstasy....
....tomorrow....
:iconacasigua:
~Acasigua Aug 27, 2004, 9:20:40 AM
Awesome.. amazing... what else? Excellent light, shadows, effects... composition... I'm still surprised with this... :+fav:

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Emerson Acasigua Xavier
:iconobsidian-nightfire:
~obsidian-nightfire Aug 27, 2004, 12:53:09 PM
Screams that are silent,
A voice that is sore,
Fallen to the shadows,
I am ever more.


I like this part. It is very dark and excellent. I also love the photo. Excellent Job. Sort of reminds me of a twisted Edgar Allen Poe work for the very last line. But excellent job none the less. :blackrose:
:iconboredandalone:
~BoReDaNdAlOnE Aug 27, 2004, 1:54:31 PM
wow, I REALY like this, very dark... nice rhyming 2 =)
add 2 ma favs!! :+favlove:
:icondarkpyrokitty:
~Darkpyrokitty Aug 27, 2004, 5:08:38 PM
Maggot filled mouth might sound more flowing, but i really like it...

Some words could be taken away...to make it flow better, but it's a really cool poem
:icondarlingburnslowly:
~DarlingBurnSlowly Aug 27, 2004, 6:21:47 PM
I like how it flows, it's really awesome, nice use of words.

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"my secret is fatally gorgeous. I'd die for you." :blackrose:
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